Inside the Monologue: Crafting Solitude with a Writing Mentor
For a while, monologues seemed to disappear from contemporary theatre. The traditional long-form solo speech was sometimes seen as old-fashioned, a relic of an era when audiences were more willing to sit still for extended dialogue. In our fast-paced digital age, where screenwriting often favors clipped, cinematic exchanges, the monologue may have appeared too dense, too rhetorical, too still.
And yet, in recent years, monologues have returned with surprising vitality. Playwrights are reclaiming this powerful form not as a nostalgic gesture but as a way to reframe theatrical intimacy, political urgency, and inner complexity. Whether it's a character wrestling with private grief or a narrator standing in for a silenced community, the monologue is back—and it's doing something new.
For playwrights trying to harness this form, the support of a creative writing mentor or coach—especially one trained in script analysis—can be an invaluable asset. Writing a monologue requires more than strong language; it requires rhythm, architecture, subtlety, and emotional layering. A mentor helps a writer see not just what is being said, but what’s truly being revealed.
Why Monologues Matter Again
Monologues have re-emerged in part because they offer what ensemble scenes often cannot: direct access to a character’s interior world. In an age of isolation, polarization, and private unravelings, these solitary voices speak to something raw and recognizably human. They can function like confessions, testimonies, invocations, or invitations.
Take, for instance, the poetic fragmentation of Jackie Sibblies Drury’s We Are Proud to Present…, or the meta-theatrical storytelling of Heidi Schreck’s What the Constitution Means to Me. These are not monologues in the old Shakespearean sense of noble declarations; they are porous, contemporary, self-aware. They let the audience into something private and unresolved. They often feel improvised, even when they are precisely calibrated.
A good monologue doesn’t just deliver backstory. It performs the act of thinking.
What Makes a Monologue Work?
The novice playwright often assumes a monologue simply needs to express what a character is feeling or remembering. But the most compelling monologues are not static. They are alive with discovery.
A seasoned writing coach or dramaturg can help a playwright craft a monologue that breathes. This involves asking key questions: What does the character believe at the beginning of the speech, and what has changed by the end? Is the language working in contrast to what the character is trying to suppress or reveal? Does the rhythm of the speech mirror the emotion being experienced?
Mentors trained in script analysis often look for these invisible patterns. They see when a monologue is merely explanatory—when it tells us about the character rather than showing us a mind at work. And perhaps more importantly, they can help a playwright trim, reshape, or amplify moments that would otherwise go unnoticed.
A Private Workshop for the Playwright’s Voice
Writing a monologue can feel a bit like standing alone in front of a mirror. It is an exercise in inhabiting a character. But it can also become an echo chamber without feedback. Because the monologue sits somewhere between speech and soliloquy, between narrative and performance, it resists easy categorization. And this is precisely why guided mentorship matters.
Through one-on-one script analysis, a writing coach can help the playwright identify how the monologue is functioning within the structure of the play as a whole. Is it an emotional climax, or a tonal counterpoint? Is it meant to destabilize the audience or offer a quiet reprieve? With careful attention, a mentor can help refine where the monologue lands, both emotionally and dramatically.
Additionally, some mentors bring an actor’s ear to the work. They understand how the speech will feel in the mouth—whether it will resonate, stumble, or ignite in performance. They might identify when a sentence is too syntactically tangled to land cleanly, or when a pause is needed to give the audience space to catch up. These small details can dramatically shift the energy of a scene.
Monologues as Political Acts
Another reason monologues have returned to the stage is their radical potential. They can be vehicles for underrepresented voices. They allow for an interruption of the dominant narrative.
In Suzan-Lori Parks’s The Red Letter Plays or Claudia Rankine’s theatrical texts, the monologue becomes a space for reflection and resistance. These works don’t just give a voice to the voiceless; they challenge the audience to confront what it means to listen.
For emerging playwrights hoping to write socially conscious work, mentorship can also help navigate the ethical complexity of representation. Who is speaking? Who is being spoken for? Is the form of the monologue being used to elevate a perspective—or to ventriloquize it?
A thoughtful creative writing mentor doesn’t impose answers, but they do help ask the right questions—questions that ensure a playwright’s artistic ambition is in alignment with their dramaturgical integrity.
Writing for the Actor, Writing for the Stage
Many monologues are written in isolation before the playwright has seen the text on its feet. But plays are not meant to live on the page. A mentor can help bridge the gap between language and performance.
Through table reads, script notes, or voice work, mentors trained in theatre practice can coach the playwright through how a monologue sounds. Is it too internal to animate? Too abstract to deliver with conviction? Or is there an untapped performative energy buried in a quiet aside?
When the mentor helps the writer identify these nuances, the monologue becomes more than a speech. It becomes a scene in itself—a charged, kinetic moment that can carry the emotional weight of an entire play.
The Monologue as Creative Challenge
Ultimately, writing a monologue is a test of voice, structure, and restraint. It asks the playwright to do something deceptively simple: create meaning through a single speaker, with no help from opposing dialogue, no staging trick, no cinematic edit.
But when done well—when the speech spirals and startles and spirals again—a monologue can linger with an audience long after the curtain falls. And that kind of power is rarely achieved alone.
Behind many of the most compelling new monologues being written today, there is often a coach, mentor, or dramaturg helping to shape the breath, the silence, the rupture, the arc.
So if you're a playwright chasing the rhythm of a voice that won’t let go, don’t go it alone. Sit down with someone who knows the form. Let them help you listen to your own work more deeply. Because sometimes, the strongest voices are forged in quiet conversation.